tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post1858400087139364273..comments2023-07-09T01:34:31.407-07:00Comments on Bloggit Write: Lillie: Enter the Darkness~ (100 Word Song)k~http://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-29367886487995329442012-05-29T15:25:02.376-07:002012-05-29T15:25:02.376-07:00Thank you Brenda, it's been a fun challenge on...Thank you Brenda, it's been a fun challenge on a weekly basis. I like the way it sounds when you say "mastered creating big moving pictures" for short spans, thank you for that. :-)k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-66494044486749987932012-05-29T10:07:36.493-07:002012-05-29T10:07:36.493-07:00I liked the imagery of this line...
'A flash o...I liked the imagery of this line...<br />'A flash of light took her voice and tucked it deep within..'<br /><br />I second Jenna's comments, the visuals in the short write and the longer story are extraordinary. As you are poet you've mastered creating big moving pictures in a short spans of time. I quite like the name, Lillie.brendahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05480258485472568272noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-30581208202661509772012-05-28T20:10:23.026-07:002012-05-28T20:10:23.026-07:00Thank you Jenna, it is proving to be a good exerci...Thank you Jenna, it is proving to be a good exercise in keeping the pace, and the 100 words. :-)k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-45866684517677193222012-05-28T20:08:36.993-07:002012-05-28T20:08:36.993-07:00beautifully done. I love the visuals and the inte...beautifully done. I love the visuals and the intensity!!Jennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06666555088992266185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-76475719673698954442012-05-28T08:26:55.648-07:002012-05-28T08:26:55.648-07:00:-) Thank you Mags, that's a great compliment....:-) Thank you Mags, that's a great compliment. If the short ones can get your attention, hopefully the full story will keep it.k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-7836648123405775422012-05-28T04:06:14.326-07:002012-05-28T04:06:14.326-07:00K- I'm off to read the rest. This has pulled m...K- I'm off to read the rest. This has pulled me in. The last line is chilling. Great job!According to Mags...https://www.blogger.com/profile/13525785322905641105noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-42788039245889652032012-05-26T21:52:48.676-07:002012-05-26T21:52:48.676-07:00Thank you for taking the time to read it. :-)Thank you for taking the time to read it. :-)k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-54266558663658052012-05-26T19:06:01.683-07:002012-05-26T19:06:01.683-07:00You use great language here. Excellent story. Lov...You use great language here. Excellent story. Love the post.Musiqal1https://www.blogger.com/profile/02047576223104983718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-82723771838603738212012-05-25T22:01:12.836-07:002012-05-25T22:01:12.836-07:00Now wouldn't that be a fun twist ;-)Now wouldn't that be a fun twist ;-)k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-43916689303475361792012-05-25T21:03:01.435-07:002012-05-25T21:03:01.435-07:00I am REALLY starting to think that Lillie and my (...I am REALLY starting to think that Lillie and my (as of yet) unamed lead character will/should be meeting up in short order.<br /><br />Personally, I can't wait...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-18692292487027229002012-05-25T15:28:40.810-07:002012-05-25T15:28:40.810-07:00Thank you for your input, and for reading the enti...Thank you for your input, and for reading the entire story. Lillie's going through some changes, but there is more to come ;-)k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-33304453990770072042012-05-25T14:25:08.205-07:002012-05-25T14:25:08.205-07:00Nooo...happy ending please. I read the entire sto...Nooo...happy ending please. I read the entire story, it is very charming. I hope Lillie comes back.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com