tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post2119517265458766912..comments2023-07-09T01:34:31.407-07:00Comments on Bloggit Write: Trifexta - Week 10 - Horror in 33 Wordsk~http://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-66408507339972915762012-04-02T09:58:22.961-07:002012-04-02T09:58:22.961-07:00True enough, it is more mystery/thriller. I guess ...True enough, it is more mystery/thriller. I guess it's more my style, I will have to be more careful with prompts if I am going to let them stretch my boundaries.<br /><br />Thank you so much for stopping by.k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-23947411863486923322012-04-02T09:57:08.776-07:002012-04-02T09:57:08.776-07:00I will definitely have to see what you are heading...I will definitely have to see what you are heading for next. I have always enjoyed your challenges :-) Thank you for stopping by to see what the prompt produced from me.k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-23090237241824400282012-04-02T09:25:04.734-07:002012-04-02T09:25:04.734-07:00This is a great little mystery/thriller. It didn&#...This is a great little mystery/thriller. It didn't scream "horror" at me, but it was really very well crafted. I love the phrase "he wasn't sacrificing words."Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-7585508094577152602012-04-02T02:02:12.994-07:002012-04-02T02:02:12.994-07:00Thanks so much for linking up with Trifecta this w...Thanks so much for linking up with Trifecta this week. Hope to see you back on Monday (10 am Eastern) for the new prompt and some exciting news about the changes Trifecta is making to spread the word about our writing community.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-54914750982422207472012-04-01T16:26:52.093-07:002012-04-01T16:26:52.093-07:00It is part of where the secret to Mickey's kno...It is part of where the secret to Mickey's knowledge is revealed. Thank you for the visit!k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-3583482479121351382012-04-01T16:14:33.684-07:002012-04-01T16:14:33.684-07:00What does the sign say? Is it a subtle instructio...What does the sign say? Is it a subtle instruction or simpple distraction from the disurbing scene? Very good.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-3491187379194782892012-04-01T15:31:06.179-07:002012-04-01T15:31:06.179-07:00Thank you Carrie. I wonder what questions it broug...Thank you Carrie. I wonder what questions it brought to your mind :-)k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-36867767052199461942012-04-01T14:09:28.677-07:002012-04-01T14:09:28.677-07:00So many questions brought up with this piece. Nice...So many questions brought up with this piece. Nice job.Carriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03472645003197467754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-51804015605206787882012-04-01T10:29:40.416-07:002012-04-01T10:29:40.416-07:00That's a great compliment, thank you Kim. I re...That's a great compliment, thank you Kim. I really like the 33 word constraints. (and the 100 word song challenge) hehehhe... I went by and read your 100 word song response, and it was great. You really captured the essence of both need, and innocence in one fell swoop. Nice job!k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-17124316458006613772012-04-01T06:05:23.183-07:002012-04-01T06:05:23.183-07:00That first line was so perfect, so strong, I don&#...That first line was so perfect, so strong, I don't even know what to say other than that I enjoyed reading it over and over. <br />Came from the Trifextra linkup.Kim Bongiorno at Let Me Start By Sayinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04445701324967739322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-44940714036304255342012-03-31T23:30:11.754-07:002012-03-31T23:30:11.754-07:00Thank you Amy, both for stopping by and for the re...Thank you Amy, both for stopping by and for the response. It is appreciated! Yes, Trifecta, and Trifextra are both addictive, and they capture my attention even when I am attempting to ignore the world... that's pretty impressive! ;-)<br /><br />I went by your blog and read your post, actually I did several times (took guests with me a few times). It was captivating, and carried out well, though the picture was a bit distracting, it most certainly added to the text.k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-1388066701170571262012-03-31T21:16:41.659-07:002012-03-31T21:16:41.659-07:00First time here, found you at Trifecta. Isn't...First time here, found you at Trifecta. Isn't it an addictive blog?<br /><br />Your description of blood without using the word, very good. The whole scene is one big question, and it leaves me longing for an answer, like the start of a detective story. Maybe you should write it? Hmmmmm... Peace, Amy Barlow Liberatore, and here's my take on the prompt: http://sharplittlepencil.com/2012/03/30/1955-trifecta-disturbing-photo-included/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-61313694043257128322012-03-31T20:39:47.663-07:002012-03-31T20:39:47.663-07:00Thanks KAT, it's a lot of fun, you ought to gi...Thanks KAT, it's a lot of fun, you ought to give it a go!k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-88267909319543197542012-03-31T20:20:30.114-07:002012-03-31T20:20:30.114-07:00I am amazed by people who can say so much in so fe...I am amazed by people who can say so much in so few words. Fascinating story!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-19973220225102496532012-03-31T19:37:19.535-07:002012-03-31T19:37:19.535-07:00Thanks T :-)Thanks T :-)k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-23352469442278585452012-03-31T18:10:37.426-07:002012-03-31T18:10:37.426-07:00Very cool, very creepy. Nice!Very cool, very creepy. Nice!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-2488749613335532762012-03-31T08:36:46.857-07:002012-03-31T08:36:46.857-07:00Thanks Lance :-) A little imagination for the mind...Thanks Lance :-) A little imagination for the mind... I love these prompts!k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-47174043010009249332012-03-31T08:36:01.877-07:002012-03-31T08:36:01.877-07:00Old dog, he is indeed.Old dog, he is indeed.k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-22595735651551396492012-03-31T08:35:39.779-07:002012-03-31T08:35:39.779-07:00Heheheh... that's fun Janna, maybe I will carr...Heheheh... that's fun Janna, maybe I will carry it out across the street. :-)k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-20574790667658039072012-03-31T02:12:27.100-07:002012-03-31T02:12:27.100-07:00Th mystery is what's scary. This is great. You...Th mystery is what's scary. This is great. You told a story in the things you didn;t write. so well done.Lancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02421199592104616785noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-80522402462415442642012-03-31T00:51:45.204-07:002012-03-31T00:51:45.204-07:00Sounds like he's holding all the cards here.Sounds like he's holding all the cards here.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-16994703770990864432012-03-30T20:11:48.723-07:002012-03-30T20:11:48.723-07:00a) Love the phrase "where the answers became ...a) Love the phrase "where the answers became questions" b) I really want to know what happens next (what he's looking at and why)!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-80756241247855878502012-03-30T20:00:00.878-07:002012-03-30T20:00:00.878-07:00Thanks Purple Moose :-) I know, now I want to writ...Thanks Purple Moose :-) I know, now I want to write about that too! hehehhek~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-31761305664141659652012-03-30T19:27:11.099-07:002012-03-30T19:27:11.099-07:00what's over there???? :) good stuffwhat's over there???? :) good stuffPurpleMoosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05593657030942243283noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-38721685883713844142012-03-30T19:22:39.611-07:002012-03-30T19:22:39.611-07:00Thank you Beth... it felt good to be pushed into t...Thank you Beth... it felt good to be pushed into the blog before Sunday ;-)k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.com