tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post5889177097973778371..comments2023-07-09T01:34:31.407-07:00Comments on Bloggit Write: Temptation (Trifecta Challenge - Trouble)k~http://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comBlogger32125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-69678852298561880262012-05-20T10:48:34.490-07:002012-05-20T10:48:34.490-07:00Thanks Steve.Thanks Steve.k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-45379711176841650702012-05-19T11:50:59.877-07:002012-05-19T11:50:59.877-07:00heheh... gotta love the song Jessie!
I'm pro...heheh... gotta love the song Jessie! <br /><br />I'm proud of them too, another 100 might have let everyone know just how hard it was for them ;-)k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-62857481378309920862012-05-19T11:23:27.006-07:002012-05-19T11:23:27.006-07:00I'm proud of Shane and Tad for remembering the...I'm proud of Shane and Tad for remembering their boundaries, though surely longing was present. But completely unrelated to the actual story...<br /><br />And then the man at the back said everyone attack<br />and it turned into a ballroom blitz<br />And the girl in the corner said ooh I wanna warn ya<br />It'll turn into a ballroom blitz<br /><br />Hope she doesn't kill them with a wink of here eye!Jester Queenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10441806535770013592noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-52766777071782362302012-05-18T08:03:19.219-07:002012-05-18T08:03:19.219-07:00Thank you. I love it when the dialogue just lets t...Thank you. I love it when the dialogue just lets the words breathe life into them. It's always a good feeling when my writing friends give me kudos for that. :-)k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-19571280791905175132012-05-17T23:23:38.093-07:002012-05-17T23:23:38.093-07:00Loved the dialog at the beginning about the movie....Loved the dialog at the beginning about the movie. You have a very good ear! Made me feel like I could know these guys and was glad they got out before trouble landed.The Gal Herselfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02566779726191649848noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-64910207473255100442012-05-17T21:47:34.222-07:002012-05-17T21:47:34.222-07:00Me too Janna :-)Me too Janna :-)k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-69966629304608140092012-05-17T21:22:22.334-07:002012-05-17T21:22:22.334-07:00I'm so glad they had sense enough to run from ...I'm so glad they had sense enough to run from trouble. So relieved!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-24437561525770214362012-05-17T17:22:43.559-07:002012-05-17T17:22:43.559-07:00Indeed! :-) Thank you.Indeed! :-) Thank you.k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-44785056408931388432012-05-17T17:22:13.890-07:002012-05-17T17:22:13.890-07:00I was thinking more along the lines of Bad Co. &qu...I was thinking more along the lines of Bad Co. "Trouble" ;-)k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-40855959260914269942012-05-17T16:57:56.168-07:002012-05-17T16:57:56.168-07:00Most men would jump willingly into that sort of tr...Most men would jump willingly into that sort of trouble.<br />Thanks for playing. Don't forget to come back tomorrow for the new prompt.Trifectahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16492626287830278024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-82329572005018488722012-05-17T16:06:54.279-07:002012-05-17T16:06:54.279-07:00Good to see the men had sense to get out of there....Good to see the men had sense to get out of there. Did Hall and Oats "Man Eater" start up when she entered the door?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-30032676927691702022012-05-17T15:58:58.574-07:002012-05-17T15:58:58.574-07:00Heheheh, I thought it was fun, thanks for enjoying...Heheheh, I thought it was fun, thanks for enjoying that tidbit with me.k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-81886811339487057802012-05-17T15:58:33.802-07:002012-05-17T15:58:33.802-07:00Thank you Michael!Thank you Michael!k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-8329195468444795942012-05-17T15:58:21.903-07:002012-05-17T15:58:21.903-07:00Thank you so much Swirls! I appreciate the feedbac...Thank you so much Swirls! I appreciate the feedback, and it's always nice to hear good things:-)k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-58464497963320947922012-05-17T12:37:39.342-07:002012-05-17T12:37:39.342-07:00first of all, I have to say "Ballroom Blitz&q...first of all, I have to say "Ballroom Blitz"??? THE BEST name ever for an establishment. Love it. <br /><br />Enjoyed this piece.PurpleMoosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05593657030942243283noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-35303479232478610622012-05-17T08:49:35.244-07:002012-05-17T08:49:35.244-07:00Everyone needs their fun. And this is good, as cle...Everyone needs their fun. And this is good, as clean as you can get it without making some serious mistakes fun. And realistic. Talking about kids and movies. The woman was great. Someone that you love to hate. Nice!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-9700534551393701702012-05-17T06:13:51.281-07:002012-05-17T06:13:51.281-07:00Thank you Annabelle. The guys just want to hang on...Thank you Annabelle. The guys just want to hang on to a bit of their youth, in a place that hangs it on the walls ;-)k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-23017093752448506192012-05-17T06:13:01.500-07:002012-05-17T06:13:01.500-07:00Thank you Libby. The guys who wouldn't are wri...Thank you Libby. The guys who wouldn't are written about plentifully, but the ones that do are missed. This was my way of giving them their moment. :-)k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-6800829108313747982012-05-17T05:45:21.112-07:002012-05-17T05:45:21.112-07:00I'm glad they had the sense to leave! I like ...I'm glad they had the sense to leave! I like that their comfort zone is this somewhat trashy sounding place called "Ballroom Blitz" but they're still ordinary good guys. It's a little unexpected.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-181685668139149472012-05-17T05:14:27.813-07:002012-05-17T05:14:27.813-07:00The dialog was very natural.
I'm impressed ...The dialog was very natural. <br /><br />I'm impressed they left when the seductress showed up!Libbyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14864587350512328594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-47519818473166720172012-05-16T20:44:15.749-07:002012-05-16T20:44:15.749-07:00Thank you ODNT, that's a wonderful compliment ...Thank you ODNT, that's a wonderful compliment :-)k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-9490635519058509062012-05-16T20:43:58.080-07:002012-05-16T20:43:58.080-07:00hehehhe... gathering all of my puns and grinnin li...hehehhe... <i>gathering all of my puns and grinnin like a Cheshire</i>k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-40219682197640037792012-05-16T20:35:21.554-07:002012-05-16T20:35:21.554-07:00This reads SO fluidly. Very well written, K.This reads SO fluidly. Very well written, K.OldDogNewTitshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07009408399605943044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-26338652724536807122012-05-16T20:34:18.636-07:002012-05-16T20:34:18.636-07:00Now, usually I'm not a "breast man" ...Now, usually I'm not a "breast man" persay, but the way you described it had me rethinking my position...<br /><br />And yes, any pun you may derive from that is fully intended =]Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-9012280151360625022012-05-16T19:55:21.302-07:002012-05-16T19:55:21.302-07:00Thanks for enjoying it Jennifer!Thanks for enjoying it Jennifer!k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.com