tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post7846469692920450426..comments2023-07-09T01:34:31.407-07:00Comments on Bloggit Write: Waiting (Friday Fictioneers)k~http://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-42648247720151661952013-05-27T10:08:40.570-07:002013-05-27T10:08:40.570-07:00Thank you for the response. It might have been fun...Thank you for the response. It might have been fun to have her walk away at precisely 3pm too. You are right it tells a bit about the character's sense of self. Could also be a starting point for a character's growth potential (in a longer story). I'm glad it drew you in.<br /><br />k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-82888798509204616472013-05-27T06:30:52.280-07:002013-05-27T06:30:52.280-07:00great description - but I'm such a cynic about...great description - but I'm such a cynic about relationships. I didn't want her to answer and let him know she'd waited that long. Bad signal that he can keep her waiting & she doesn't have a life of her own. (Just letting you know that you drew me into the story! ;) ) -jAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-31393323865813173572013-05-26T09:52:11.229-07:002013-05-26T09:52:11.229-07:00Thank you t~ :-)Thank you t~ :-)k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-7926939327624809692013-05-26T06:43:46.662-07:002013-05-26T06:43:46.662-07:00As always k~, I am dumbfounded by your talent. Lov...As always k~, I am dumbfounded by your talent. Love!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-66268473468939312512013-05-25T17:29:43.518-07:002013-05-25T17:29:43.518-07:00Thank you Rochelle. I appreciate happy endings mys...Thank you Rochelle. I appreciate happy endings myself. <br /><br />k~k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-26445306304406169882013-05-25T14:45:16.894-07:002013-05-25T14:45:16.894-07:00Dear K,
I love a happy ending. Nice one.
Shalom,...Dear K, <br />I love a happy ending. Nice one. <br />Shalom,<br />RochelleRochelle Wisoff-Fieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00090374697915874481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-63431724017878109552013-05-25T11:49:36.362-07:002013-05-25T11:49:36.362-07:00Thank you Shirley.Thank you Shirley.k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-18188098597463088082013-05-25T11:48:46.043-07:002013-05-25T11:48:46.043-07:00Janet,
Thank you for the feedback. It was really...Janet, <br /><br />Thank you for the feedback. It was really late (or should I say early) when I put this one together and I just missed it. I feel better now. <br /><br />k~k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-47893476897947066382013-05-25T09:42:13.771-07:002013-05-25T09:42:13.771-07:00Nice job with anticipation. Sure glad it ended wel...Nice job with anticipation. Sure glad it ended well.Shirleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04337958837908666504noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-59972542676034880032013-05-25T07:12:54.524-07:002013-05-25T07:12:54.524-07:00I like the idea of anxiety building an arsenal tha...I like the idea of anxiety building an arsenal that it would presumably fire at her at the most inopportune moments. I did wonder whether you want this: “Ring” she answered “Yes, yes, I’m here", which is saying she said the word "ring" or if the phone is ringing which would more likely be written:<br /><br />Ring.<br /><br />She answered, "Yes..." (or it could be written all in one paragraph.<br /><br />Glad he finally called.<br /><br />janetAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com