tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post3924451434754212471..comments2023-07-09T01:34:31.407-07:00Comments on Bloggit Write: Window Watching (Friday Fictioneers)k~http://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comBlogger31125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-36891888987072813752013-02-26T20:18:34.173-08:002013-02-26T20:18:34.173-08:00Thank you Stephanie :-) I have a tendency to lean ...Thank you Stephanie :-) I have a tendency to lean toward poetic lines... sometimes that's a good thing, and others, it's not.<br />k~k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-89514579475838207522013-02-26T18:20:21.874-08:002013-02-26T18:20:21.874-08:00It's like a prose poem. As many others have sa...It's like a prose poem. As many others have said - that first line shines! And the white picket smile. But the mood of the piece with its nostalgia and melancholy is lovely.Stephhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06117409443842865395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-85129546714093605752013-02-26T08:00:32.698-08:002013-02-26T08:00:32.698-08:00There sure are. :-)There sure are. :-)k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-37793105330137071492013-02-26T06:23:46.244-08:002013-02-26T06:23:46.244-08:00Lots of memories in old buildingsLots of memories in old buildingsAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-8747604894242148752013-02-24T12:32:38.978-08:002013-02-24T12:32:38.978-08:00Thank you Brudberg. I enjoy playing with words, an...Thank you Brudberg. I enjoy playing with words, and it is much more fun when others enjoy it with me. k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-70204577628406357672013-02-24T12:20:05.725-08:002013-02-24T12:20:05.725-08:00I love the alliteration on w in the beginning,,thi...I love the alliteration on w in the beginning,,this text sings :-)brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-78415857284570466512013-02-24T10:12:58.338-08:002013-02-24T10:12:58.338-08:00Thank you Shirley. :-)
Thank you Shirley. :-)<br />k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-18832546843791265622013-02-24T04:51:11.267-08:002013-02-24T04:51:11.267-08:00Very nice. Loved that last line. Very nice. Loved that last line. Shirleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04337958837908666504noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-35932715444585957322013-02-23T20:28:58.363-08:002013-02-23T20:28:58.363-08:00Thank you so much :-) I love the name you have cho...Thank you so much :-) I love the name you have chosen for yourself - it made me giggle.k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-59899804957595331732013-02-23T19:04:38.776-08:002013-02-23T19:04:38.776-08:00i absolutely love the brilliance in your first and...i absolutely love the brilliance in your first and last lines. a very descriptive tale. a very good read. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-9625466454354555462013-02-23T18:15:50.258-08:002013-02-23T18:15:50.258-08:00Jealous? m'Friend your work wanders with words...Jealous? m'Friend your work wanders with words in your own way, all the time. Moving people's hearts and thoughts with the way you set them afoot.<br /><br />Thank you t~k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-73452826181487657372013-02-23T18:14:36.129-08:002013-02-23T18:14:36.129-08:00Thank you :-)
Thank you :-)<br />k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-71518452693798547032013-02-23T11:48:14.449-08:002013-02-23T11:48:14.449-08:00First line, sublime. First line, sublime. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-81741113126989032182013-02-23T10:14:58.628-08:002013-02-23T10:14:58.628-08:00Thank you Perry. Thank you Perry. k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-45107999902097216782013-02-23T10:14:15.924-08:002013-02-23T10:14:15.924-08:00Thank you Rochelle. Thank you Rochelle. k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-33141459490635048732013-02-23T10:13:21.670-08:002013-02-23T10:13:21.670-08:00Thank you Sandra.
Thank you Sandra.<br />k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-5278532192106056062013-02-23T09:38:11.217-08:002013-02-23T09:38:11.217-08:00I love what you do with words k~, quite jealous in...I love what you do with words k~, quite jealous in fact. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-74325994195033244002013-02-23T07:20:01.562-08:002013-02-23T07:20:01.562-08:00Very sweet recognition of the world that changes b...Very sweet recognition of the world that changes but the interconnected memories that linger on. Quite nice! Perry Blockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13439590071776264237noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-16309232949499458112013-02-23T04:40:50.735-08:002013-02-23T04:40:50.735-08:00Dear K,
Quiet replaced the cacophony...hard hitti...Dear K, <br />Quiet replaced the cacophony...hard hitting and stark contrast with subtlety. Overall, an enjoyably descriptive piece. <br />shalom,<br />RochelleRochelle Wisoff-Fieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00090374697915874481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-86549096430576339042013-02-23T03:22:28.332-08:002013-02-23T03:22:28.332-08:00The first line read like poetry. Nicely done.The first line read like poetry. Nicely done.Sandra Crookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00534491053812317718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-72223214155601232852013-02-22T21:05:29.323-08:002013-02-22T21:05:29.323-08:00It was the vision of her looking out the window, w...It was the vision of her looking out the window, with the mirror right beside her, that prompted this write. Thank you for enjoying it.k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-77662226261971245192013-02-22T21:04:16.570-08:002013-02-22T21:04:16.570-08:00Thank you.Thank you.k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-44711360132766929412013-02-22T21:03:31.876-08:002013-02-22T21:03:31.876-08:00Thank you for the response Linda. I appreciate the...Thank you for the response Linda. I appreciate the specific feedback. <br /><br />Nice to meet you too.k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-61344833019065269352013-02-22T20:39:58.452-08:002013-02-22T20:39:58.452-08:00Interesting prose here, verging on poetry. Beauti...Interesting prose here, verging on poetry. Beautiful, and I wonder about that white picket smile. My favourite lines are the beginning, but the first paragraph is particularly beautiful - and this line, sublime: Ungraceful curves disguise charmed endurance with neglect in an attraction of its own.<br />Nice to meet you,<br />LindauraLinda Palundhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10306701232418627061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-7336181905811899092013-02-22T20:34:09.509-08:002013-02-22T20:34:09.509-08:00lovely.. especially the last linelovely.. especially the last linenightlakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07005267668517497828noreply@blogger.com