tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.comments2023-07-09T01:34:31.407-07:00Bloggit Writek~http://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comBlogger2643125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-66239715930825870712015-05-09T21:41:47.480-07:002015-05-09T21:41:47.480-07:00Hi Sam :-)
It feels good to be back. Thank you fo...Hi Sam :-)<br /><br />It feels good to be back. Thank you for going on the journey with me. <br /><br />What kind of road trip are you on? <br /><br />k~<br /><br />k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-55623653643086474342015-05-09T21:02:00.785-07:002015-05-09T21:02:00.785-07:00*sigh* Oh how I have missed you and your beautiful...*sigh* Oh how I have missed you and your beautiful words. This has such elegance...I'm on a road trip and I love my dog. Thank you for taking me away! <br /><br />It's great to have you back in class!!SAMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08933707208366521149noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-22560085616885811262015-05-07T22:15:17.418-07:002015-05-07T22:15:17.418-07:00Thank you Amanda. I enjoy Master Class. :-)
k~Thank you Amanda. I enjoy Master Class. :-)<br />k~k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-28744069852867265862015-05-07T15:53:25.571-07:002015-05-07T15:53:25.571-07:00I got goosebumps. You have portrayed such a sweet ...I got goosebumps. You have portrayed such a sweet sadness. Thank you for participating in Master Class!<br />Amanda<br />Editor in Chief <br />Eat Sleep Write<br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14840895279593618692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-620161871322743062015-05-07T10:00:35.176-07:002015-05-07T10:00:35.176-07:00Yes it is Christopher. Thank you.Yes it is Christopher. Thank you.k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-21808029492751442172015-05-06T17:48:49.153-07:002015-05-06T17:48:49.153-07:00Bittersweet. Always sad to say goodbye. Bittersweet. Always sad to say goodbye. Another Government Employeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11736588211704245188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-17336772652334191462015-04-21T12:26:49.379-07:002015-04-21T12:26:49.379-07:00Thank you Sam. :-)Thank you Sam. :-)k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-82872699317301113202015-02-06T06:20:44.621-08:002015-02-06T06:20:44.621-08:00I really love the imagination of Grandpa T and can...I really love the imagination of Grandpa T and can;t wait to see where his words will take us!SAMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08933707208366521149noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-16224575365578781302015-01-26T23:02:51.102-08:002015-01-26T23:02:51.102-08:00Thank you so much Tara. I think the stories that a...Thank you so much Tara. I think the stories that are passed on are more important than most would think at the time they are heard, but later they become treasures to remember and hold close. My grandmother on my father's side was a writer, journalist, and historian, so there is quite a bit that we have from that corner, but not as much in other areas. <br /><br />Thank you for the encouragement. :-)<br />k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-83660532285670878052015-01-26T11:58:15.591-08:002015-01-26T11:58:15.591-08:00I often wish I had recorded my grandparent's s...I often wish I had recorded my grandparent's stories. I know so little about their lives when they were young. I need to do that with my parents now. I'm looking forward to reading where this story goes.Tara R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02993625193184914299noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-73950616685441777582015-01-23T09:10:08.120-08:002015-01-23T09:10:08.120-08:00Thank you for taking the time to read this one Lei...Thank you for taking the time to read this one Leigh. :-)k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-6841135678987537352015-01-22T06:43:56.663-08:002015-01-22T06:43:56.663-08:00I am looking forward to the next episode! I am looking forward to the next episode! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00747623369987517157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-3274520739680614882015-01-19T09:23:38.321-08:002015-01-19T09:23:38.321-08:00I think Carla will develop, but I am going to give...I think Carla will develop, but I am going to give her character time to simmer before I do any more with her. I like that she can be invisible without trying, but I am not sure she is a super hero type. We shall see as time goes by and she sits in the grey matter compost bin for a bit.<br /><br />Thank you for taking the time to respond.<br />k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-67698778525419401292015-01-19T09:21:25.746-08:002015-01-19T09:21:25.746-08:00Thanks for taking the time to respond. I appreciat...Thanks for taking the time to respond. I appreciate it.k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-68658303228140765272015-01-19T08:09:09.339-08:002015-01-19T08:09:09.339-08:00I'm with Tara. I really like the secret identi...I'm with Tara. I really like the secret identity angle, too. I know a couple of ladies like Carla as well. Your descriptions of the dancing and the way the music affected her body are spot on. Do you plan to do more with this story? It's perfect as it is, but there is room for more, of course. I can see Carla being the secret heroine of many stories.SAMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08933707208366521149noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-44559725499292907662015-01-19T06:11:35.718-08:002015-01-19T06:11:35.718-08:00I like the secret identity angle. That can be very...I like the secret identity angle. That can be very empowering.Tara R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02993625193184914299noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-19118727187888384362015-01-15T23:25:40.943-08:002015-01-15T23:25:40.943-08:00Thank you Tara for the feedback. That's two wr...Thank you Tara for the feedback. That's two writer's whose opinion I respect. Perhaps I will have to sift through this and get to the meat of the story. :-)<br />k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-10994652763457162982015-01-14T13:54:23.560-08:002015-01-14T13:54:23.560-08:00Very believable dialogue, I can hear this happenin...Very believable dialogue, I can hear this happening with many relationships, either as friends or loved ones. I agree with SAM too, this could be the start of a much larger story.Tara R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02993625193184914299noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-19504617195040730872015-01-13T22:50:40.212-08:002015-01-13T22:50:40.212-08:00Thank you for the input SAM. I enjoy working with ...Thank you for the input SAM. I enjoy working with dialogue, particularly when it feels right. I wasn't sure if it had enough intrigue to carry it out, but you have made me reconsider the possibilities of this story growing.<br />Thank you for having Class again. :-)k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-44137305899622163382015-01-13T05:50:42.562-08:002015-01-13T05:50:42.562-08:00This has the potential to be a much bigger and qui...This has the potential to be a much bigger and quite enthralling story. You've successfully weaved the intrigue leaving me wondering why Sandy doesn't want to talk to Miguel. The frustration is obvious and I can actually hear the two voices distinctly when I read, which is fantastic! Thank you for joining in the Master Class this week!SAMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08933707208366521149noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-59508757609794155142014-06-09T01:03:55.130-07:002014-06-09T01:03:55.130-07:00Thank you Stephanie, for taking the time to check ...Thank you Stephanie, for taking the time to check it out. Bella should be safe, she only has a couple books with her. k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-60338863040485943422014-06-09T01:03:11.352-07:002014-06-09T01:03:11.352-07:00I must have been channeling the scene. ;-)
Thanks...I must have been channeling the scene. ;-)<br /><br />Thanks Tarak~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-47777496623562381632014-04-28T09:19:20.439-07:002014-04-28T09:19:20.439-07:00Thanks SAMThanks SAMk~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-31742390887039771212014-04-28T05:55:34.631-07:002014-04-28T05:55:34.631-07:00I concur that this should be more. it's got ep...I concur that this should be more. it's got epic written all through it. My apologies that I am so late in getting around.SAMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08933707208366521149noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6323534633493086556.post-70929426770857303542014-04-14T20:23:32.233-07:002014-04-14T20:23:32.233-07:00Lifting books? Tsk tsk tsk, I hope Bella doesn'...Lifting books? Tsk tsk tsk, I hope Bella doesn't overexert herself. ;-)<br /><br />An amusing character sketch complete with subtle reproach.<br /><br />Stephaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10043282351683499635noreply@blogger.com