Master Class 2015 - Ancient Mutterings
Master
Class is a group of bloggers who write as a result of the inspiration from
given prompts. The prompts are different each week, but some things remain the
same:
- Use the prompt as a title or within the story.
- Keep it within 700 words.
- Submit it by 6:00 PM EST Sunday
This
week's prompts are:
Speculative idiot
On location
Ancient mutterings
Here's
my development based on the prompt "Ancient Mutterings":
Forever and Ever
After several weeks of watching Grandpa Terrance decline, Madison decided to bring a tape recorder with her for their visit. She wanted to be able to keep as much
of him with her as she could, as his descent into dementia persisted. Grandpa T
was a grandmaster of storytellers, for as long as she could remember, he would
gather the children around at his feet while he plucked ripe gorgonberries from
mid-air and passed them around in a bowl for everyone to taste. If the story
lasted an hour the kids would ask for more at the end, they would have sat
there all day if he had let them. Instead, he would give them some type of
mission to focus on for the rest of their afternoon that took them outside in a
state of wonder.
"Billy,
I want you to find the wings of Miss Carrion's butterfly. She will not be able
to return home until she has them back on her. You can look in the puddle of
fallen leaves by the oak in your backyard. Look very closely though, they could
be disguised as a leaf themselves" he said as he patted him on the back of
the head.
Billy's
attentive gaze never wavered as he nodded, while Grandpa T gave him
instructions. He stood only three feet tall, on spindly legs, but when he was
on a mission from Grandpa T he stood taller than the redwoods.
"Trudy,
I want you to find the pathway that leads to mushroom hollow, where Miss
Carrion's butterfly is supposed to go. You will need this," he said as he
carefully put a willow switch into her hand. A purple crystal was held in place
at the top, where it was tied with leather laces. "It is important to see
that the sun shines through the crystal on the mushrooms when you find the
hollow, you will be able to tell if it is the right place when the light
becomes a rainbow over the top of the largest mushroom. Be sure to mark the
place, so that we can find it again."
Trudy's
eyes were alight with a twinkling that she only found after storytime when
Grandpa T would send her on another mission.
All
of the children in the neighborhood knew Grandpa T. All of the children in the
neighborhood loved Grandpa T, but that was then. For the last seven years, Grandpa T
had been tucked away in Morning Meadows Retirement Community. The Meadows, as
it was fondly referred to by those who were familiar with the area, specialized
in providing a homelike atmosphere for people whose memories were fading.
Madison
came to see Grandpa T three to four times a week, always with a smile. So far,
he remembered her, but she knew that might not always be the case.
(This is the start of a much
larger story. The prompt has crafted thoughts in my head that need to be
nourished. Rather than dumping you in the middle of stark territory, I will leave you here, where Madison
considers what is necessary for her to save Grandpa T's memories, as he is
losing the ability to retain them.)
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I am looking forward to the next episode!
ReplyDeleteThank you for taking the time to read this one Leigh. :-)
DeleteI often wish I had recorded my grandparent's stories. I know so little about their lives when they were young. I need to do that with my parents now. I'm looking forward to reading where this story goes.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Tara. I think the stories that are passed on are more important than most would think at the time they are heard, but later they become treasures to remember and hold close. My grandmother on my father's side was a writer, journalist, and historian, so there is quite a bit that we have from that corner, but not as much in other areas.
DeleteThank you for the encouragement. :-)
I really love the imagination of Grandpa T and can;t wait to see where his words will take us!
ReplyDeleteThank you Sam. :-)
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