33 Word Trifexta Prompt:
"The phone rang at 4am."
She pulled the pillow back over her head to languish in a lucid dream too deep to dangle from.
Here, where they once slept twisted into one body, he would always be hers.
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Another one where I walk away saddened. Tight write.
ReplyDeleteThank you booguloo. Perhaps I will have to ramp it up a bit to fun and silly next time :-)
Deletesad but very romantic
ReplyDeleteI liked this.
Thanks Lance, I have a bit of the romantic built into me... and perhaps a taste of the sadness associated with it too.
DeleteHmmmm...I like it.
ReplyDeleteThank you Susan. (curious about the 'hmmmm' ;-)
DeleteNicely done. I'm too long winded to write anything in just 33 words!
ReplyDeleteIt's a pretty good challenge for focusing on the bite size chunks of something. Thanks for reading it Kat!
DeleteLoved this: "...once slept twisted into one body" X
ReplyDeleteThank you Shah.
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ReplyDeleteThank you for letting me know. I will do my best to return.
DeleteI could taste the longing. Dipping toes, entangled in dreams with an old lover...this was great.
ReplyDeleteCame from the Trifextra linkup.
Thank you Kim. I like the response Dipping toes, entangled in dreams... mmmmm.. yep!
DeleteI love that it was a lucid dream, too, suggesting that she can hold onto this relationship forever if she just sleeps long enough.
ReplyDeleteYes, that is something only another lucid dreamer might catch ;-) Thanks for taking a peek Jester Queen.
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