Glimpses

Saturday, March 3, 2012

Toes Tangled




33 Word Trifexta Prompt:

"The phone rang at 4am."





She pulled the pillow back over her head to languish in a lucid dream too deep to dangle from.

Here, where they once slept twisted into one body, he would always be hers.

16 comments:

  1. Another one where I walk away saddened. Tight write.

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    1. Thank you booguloo. Perhaps I will have to ramp it up a bit to fun and silly next time :-)

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    1. Thanks Lance, I have a bit of the romantic built into me... and perhaps a taste of the sadness associated with it too.

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    1. Thank you Susan. (curious about the 'hmmmm' ;-)

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  4. Nicely done. I'm too long winded to write anything in just 33 words!

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    1. It's a pretty good challenge for focusing on the bite size chunks of something. Thanks for reading it Kat!

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  5. Loved this: "...once slept twisted into one body" X

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  6. Thanks so much for linking up to Trifextra. Remember, this weekend’s entries are being judged by the Trifecta community, so make sure you visit the site at the close of the challenge to vote. Our linking service will not allow you to vote for a link from the same computer where it was submitted, so plan ahead! Voting closes 12 hours after the close of the challenge. Winners will be announced with the Monday post. Hope to see you back then.

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    1. Thank you for letting me know. I will do my best to return.

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  7. I could taste the longing. Dipping toes, entangled in dreams with an old lover...this was great.
    Came from the Trifextra linkup.

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    1. Thank you Kim. I like the response Dipping toes, entangled in dreams... mmmmm.. yep!

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  8. I love that it was a lucid dream, too, suggesting that she can hold onto this relationship forever if she just sleeps long enough.

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    1. Yes, that is something only another lucid dreamer might catch ;-) Thanks for taking a peek Jester Queen.

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