Glimpses

Tuesday, April 10, 2012

I ~ I Am













I Am

I am the ability to love unconditionally, to dream you awake

I wonder whether we are asleep or sleepwalking.

I hear life's music in everything around me.

I see the song played out in the sky.

I want to dance with you.

I am the ability to love unconditionally, to dream you awake.


I pretend that I am stronger than Hercules but,

I feel fragile in your hands.

I touch the stars in the sky with anxious fingertips

I worry that someone will catch me crying

I cry every time a hungry child dies

I am the ability to love unconditionally, to dream you awake.


I understand that all things have their own time

I say that love will conquer all

I dream beside you, safely protected from harm

I try to find the joy in each breath of life

I hope it makes a difference, somewhere along the way

I am the ability to love unconditionally, to dream you awake.


© k~





This post is part of the
A-Z Challenge 2012.

26 comments:

  1. "I am the ability to love unconditionally, to dream you awake."

    This line will stay with me for quite some time.

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    1. gentle smile It is always an honour when something can be taken with another from the words written, thank you for reading Amy.

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  2. This is so good!! I love this too!

    Kathy
    http://gigglingtruckerswife.blogspot.com

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    1. It's really nice to have people enjoy them with me. :-)

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  3. Such a lovely, lovely celebration of life and love. I am... delighted and heartwarmed.

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    1. Your creativity grows on me Beverly, in your posts, and your responses alike. :-)

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  4. k,
    "I pretend that I am stronger than Hercules" -- I love that. Don't we all "pretend"?

    I love the truth and honesty in your poem.

    The Write Soil
    1st Writes

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    1. I think we do Dawn. Sometimes it is in those moments that we are both pretending and recognizing at the same time, that magickal encounters take place.

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  5. "I am the ability to love unconditionally, to dream you awake."
    What a beautiful line to anchor your poem

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    1. Thank you Sylvia. Dreams hold a very special place in my life, both in the waking, and sleeping parts.

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  6. "I dream beside you, safely protected from harm"

    I love this line and have found myself feeling that for 30 years with my unconditionally loving husband. You're amazingly talented Miss k~
    Let the Rain continue....♥

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    1. I love that Jo :-)

      Thank you for your always wonderful attention... you have become part of what I look forward to in this world of words.

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  7. Dearest November: in this A-Z challenge you truly are dear to me; you actually seem to read what I write, and I'm become a bit tuckered out by the challenge. And you write comments that touch me. Thank you. Especially on this last one; dealing with my mother' s aging and issues is truly taxing, especially as I am also balancing two children and a husband rarely home. I lean on my audience, and I find a reprieve in your poetic ways.

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    1. Sandra, what a kind thing to say. I do read what I respond to, and when the post touches me, I do my best to let the person who spent time writing it know that. You seem to write straight from the heart, and that catches my attention every time. I'm really glad that you are finding a bit of comfort in the words we share.

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  8. What a beautiful piece of poetry. To dream someone awake - that is a powerful image.

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    1. Thank you Sharon. I find a strong spiritual base in the power of words, and in the power of dreams.

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  9. Very beautiful, November Rain...the power of yourself and your love is evident in this poem.

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    1. Thank you Linda. It's in the sharing that they become so much more than they might have been shut in a drawer hidden from the light.

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  10. This is wonderful. I can see it set to music!

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    1. Oh that's a fun thought. Most of the time when I write lyrics I hear the music while I am writing (which makes it hard to read sometimes) but this one, I had never considered that with. Make me think will ya;-) Thanks Beth.

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  11. Very lovely. I would love to hear it set to music, hitting all those "I"s at the beginning of each line with a beat...verra nice.

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    1. That would be fun to hear, I can see what you mean.
      Thank you Claire.

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