Blake used the spoon as a
plunger to push all the floating alphabet noodles to the bottom of the bowl. He
was not really interested in eating, he wanted to be out in the rain.
Bite by
bite, he fed his soup to Rothschild whose name was bigger than he was by 10
fold. The 3 1/2 pound Chihuahua had joined the family shortly after Blake did.
They had an understanding when it came to food. Roth wouldn't tell Torie that
Blake wasn't eating, if Blake didn't tell Torie Roth was. The union was perfect
for days like this.
"I'm done Aunt Torie,
can I go now?" he asked as the last bit of carrot fell on the rug at his
feet.
"Did you get enough to
eat?" she asked without looking up from the project she was working on.
"Yep" and off he
went, back into the yellow room with the big bay windows, before she had a
chance to answer him. Roth followed with his little tail wagging.
"C'mon Rothy, get up
here" he patted his hand on the soft stripes of the window seat cushion,
and Rothschild rocked back and forth until he mustered up enough steam to jump
that high. "There ya go" he snuggled him into the crook of his right
arm, where he stayed contentedly and they both fell asleep.
awwww...I'm liking this.
ReplyDeleteOh good Jo, it really is different from anything I've written so far, and coming through in a way that I am not accustom to. Or maybe I am just listening closer ;-)
Deleteoh, k, i am interested... keep going....
ReplyDeleteI did not see a reply button here before... NICE! Now I can respond individually!
DeleteYep, you caught your characters in the moment and I'm ready for more.
ReplyDeleteGPD, I think my characters caught me! Whichever, I am glad they are speaking up loudly. Thank you.
DeleteThis is such a good story. More please...
ReplyDeleteThank you KAT, it warms my heart to see that others are enjoying it with me.
DeleteI agree with the above - more, please. I am all in -
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Maria :-)
DeleteThe hook is set... Great job! Now I want to read more.
ReplyDeleteThank you Darlene for your encouragement.
DeleteAs a new member this is the first of your stories that I read. I completely enjoyed it and really wanted it to go on, please do not end it here...I will never know what could have happened unless you continue.
ReplyDeleteLoved this...and waiting to see what happens next.
Sondra - I'm glad to see you blogging about! This one will continue to grow... it's taken on a life of it's own, almost like a parallel dialogue to my own life. It fascinates me. I am glad you are enjoying it with me:-)
DeleteYour post brought back memories of when my kids were little - my daughter used to flick her peas off of the high chair tray so our little West Highland terrier could eat them! Great post - simple and filled with images.
ReplyDeleteSharon - Love that, pea-flicking stuff. A friends tot did that too, just with the peas though... hehehhe.. the dog would sit there waiting so patiently!
DeleteNice! A boy's first best friend--special always.
ReplyDeleteThank you Beth :-) This story makes me laugh a bit, because things like the dog's name just happen. It's been an interesting journey thus far, thanks for being a part of the ride!
DeleteYou know, I love this small story about a few special moments in time! I just love it!
ReplyDeleteah thank you beachlover, it's a growing story, ever day!
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