Wonderful poem. I never could write poetry well.Joycehttp://joycelansky.blogspot.com
Thank you Joyce. Poetry was the first kind of writing that I ever dabbled in.
Very nice! I only enjoy poetry when it rhymes and had cadence. You passed the test. I like this poem very much.
Darlene, mine do not always rhyme, but I hear a sound in my head when I write them, that I just listen to. Thank you!
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