flail in a world unknown.
Giants with enormous eyes
gaze at the tiny spectacle--
with a myriad of faces.
He looks through unfocused eyes
with a quizzical awareness;
something has
changed.
I love this from the baby's perspective. Brilliantly done!!Kathyhttp://gigglingtruckerswife.blogspot.com
Thank you Kathy, it was a fun one to construct :-)
Nice play of point of view. LeePlaces I RememberWrote By RoteAn A to Z Co-host blog
Thank you Arlee.
Read this earlier today, and read it again due partially to the email prompt - loved it each time, and may need to read it once more as a result =]
Ah, the networked blogger sends emails. I like that for some of the blogs I follow The only hazard is that sometimes, I will read, and not respond. Not usually, but sometimes :-) Thanks t
That's really cute, a lovely bit of writing that captures so much in so few words.Dinohttp://dpfinnie.com
Thank you Dino, that objective seems to be one that I can grab a hold of easily.
Rock a bye baby...welcome to the world. ♥
:-)
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I love this from the baby's perspective. Brilliantly done!!
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http://gigglingtruckerswife.blogspot.com
Thank you Kathy, it was a fun one to construct :-)
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Places I Remember
Wrote By Rote
An A to Z Co-host blog
Thank you Arlee.
DeleteRead this earlier today, and read it again due partially to the email prompt - loved it each time, and may need to read it once more as a result =]
ReplyDeleteAh, the networked blogger sends emails. I like that for some of the blogs I follow The only hazard is that sometimes, I will read, and not respond. Not usually, but sometimes :-) Thanks t
DeleteThat's really cute, a lovely bit of writing that captures so much in so few words.
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http://dpfinnie.com
Thank you Dino, that objective seems to be one that I can grab a hold of easily.
DeleteRock a bye baby...welcome to the world. ♥
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