Glimpses

Tuesday, April 24, 2012

Waiting on Lillie (100 Word Song)


This weeks 100 Word song challenge inspirational song is:
The Rolling Stones: Waiting on a Friend

If it inspires you, join in the fun!



(A continuation of last week's challenge)

Trevor stumbled over the cord next to Lillie's bed landing hard on the cold floor.

"Damn" he muttered, as he pulled himself to his feet again.

He was supposed to have driven Lillie to the wedding. He couldn't help but wonder if he had…

"Lillie, are you in there?" he asked as he lifted one of her eyelids.

Lillie laughed from across the room. "Fool, you can't see me from in there."

"I am so glad to see you Trev, we have to get to the wedding. I have the cake in the car and we simply can't be late."

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12 comments:

  1. LanceApril 25, 2012 at 5:37 AM

    I like the interplay between them. It's special like the relationship in the Stones song.

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    1. k~April 25, 2012 at 9:40 AM

      Oh good. I'm glad that you can see the correlation. I was afraid it might be too vague.

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  2. CameronApril 25, 2012 at 5:38 AM

    I'm a little disoriented, but 100 words isn't a lot in terms of plot momentum, so onward we go, because I am also very curious...

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    1. k~April 25, 2012 at 9:41 AM

      Thanks Cameron... yeah, this is the first one I have attempted to move forward with inside the 100 word song. I am not sure I am good enough to keep that up, I may have to include pieces outside of the 100 word song challenge in order to be less vague.

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    2. OldDogNewTitsApril 30, 2012 at 1:00 PM

      I agree with Cameron. Leaves you wanting more ...

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    3. k~April 30, 2012 at 1:45 PM

      And so it will be... I am going to do my best to make it a 100 Word Song Challenge story... that's a challenge of another sort. Thank you ODNT

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  3. AnonymousApril 25, 2012 at 6:34 AM

    You've confuseled me a bit, but I like the feeling and I can't wait to see where this goes!

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    1. k~April 25, 2012 at 9:42 AM

      Thanks for being a trooper t. I was worried about this one, sending it out to sail with only half a mast, but I will probably scrap doing it in the 100 word challenge and just begin to write it... which means, I will also probably move it ;-)

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  4. TashtooApril 25, 2012 at 12:07 PM

    I want cake!!! I think you can do this! 100 words at a time. Will take skill and perseverance, but imagine being able to see it all come together!

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    1. k~April 25, 2012 at 1:19 PM

      It's a really good challenge, one that I will have to think about each step of the way. I am up for it, as long as you promise to give me constructive criticism if I veer too far to the left or right ;-) Thanks Natasha

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  5. According to Mags...April 27, 2012 at 3:33 PM

    Keep up the challenge K. You can so do this. This intrigues me and I have to know more!

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