Wednesday, July 11, 2012

Transitions (100 Word Song)

All about the 100 Word Song Challenge

This week's 100 Word Song challenge inspiration is I Hate Kate's "Picture Perfect Hope" chosen for Lance and Leeroy by Kat.

Lillie's life was changed on the way to a friend's wedding, in ways she has yet to discover. This is a continuing story about Lillie through the 100 Word Song Challenge. The last 100 words are here, and the story in its entirety can be found here.


 Lillie's head pounded like heavy bass when she woke. Trevor held her body close. He didn't move as she tried to sit up.

"What the hell is the matter with you Trevor!"

A riot of emotions shuffled through Trevor so fast he couldn't speak.

"Trevor, talk to me! What are we doing here?" Disjointed thoughts paraded through Lillie's mind, as the pieces of a puzzle combated with serene surroundings.

Before Lillie could say another word, Trevor kissed her, softly at first. Lillie responded as if every chain that had ever been a part of her internal world fell away instantly.


  1. YES! that carpet pulled out from under you errr Lillie, moment. conflict and crisis and how she handles it

    great interpretation

    1. Heheh, from the carpet pull to the magick carpet ride in under 60 ;-) Thanks Lance.

  2. That kiss. That passionate and chain-breaking kiss. Perfect!

    1. Kisses are my favorite kind of magick :-)


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